Overall I agree with the feedback I have been given on my look book and my brand I feel has been represented well by it.
The main Improvements I was given was to remove a couple of spelling mistakes and make sure that the photos in the background are not pix elated, also to make some borders around some of the design photos and to change the white background of the text as it looks rushed and half done, finally to keep the font consistent.
However they said that they like the look book overall and the designs were good and represent the brand well, they also said they like the background photos as they GO along with the inspiration for the brand and designs, also that it is a very male dominant brand which it is, so that is good.
Overall the most liked thing about it is the brand logo as it shows off the brand well and they liked the use of two different languages (English and Japanese).
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